Poem called Hazel, you like?

What a magical life to lead
Anticipation in each new step
With no outcome for her to heed
No facts to neither face up to nor accept

She flashes and flirts around all eve
To steal the heart, the soul and mind
The victims forlorn are made to believe
As she gets love and lust intertwined

Whilst forsaken, contentment but a dream
Sedation comes through narcotics to blur
Her surrendering wail and stifled scream
And the vile gaze she gives to the mirror

But she is not alone, its said there鈥檚 a flame
By her, he鈥檚 loved more than life itself
From her own mouth with a nose of cocaine
And cleaning last night鈥檚 shed blood of her shelf

Through posses of friends, nothing is wrong
Time is a doctor don鈥檛 hurry for aid
She can find her own cure through song
And so the once bright light begins to fade

A thought should be passed on perhaps someday
Through tulips scattered round the grave
But in this era we shan鈥檛 yet dismay
For now her life, magical, as she can behave

ur really talented. this poem is ah-mazing...keep up the good work (;

u v got a good vocabulary

right words wrong order

The ending was a little weak. Sort of like the narrator lost his/her point of view or ran out of creative steam at the end. But it is a credible effort.

It's really good but it's like at the end you kinda got lost. But you definitely have talent. Now practice and develop it.