One of my Poems (My Family and I?

My family and I have been through alot my father is an alcoholic I think he feels he needs it to express himself. My mother has tended to be violent ive tried everthing to calm her down nothing helps. My sister is older she's 33 and im only sixteen but for some reason she envies me. With no self respect for herself. My brother is lock up and put deep like an unwanted book put away in shelf. My uncle going through aids, drug addiction and and the worse kind of poverty. As for myself, I was following the foot steps of my brother and my father my better judgement some how stops me. I know im young but their is now nothing that can hold me to stay in the life of the poor. I'll learn from my families mistakes and make myself more.

Okay, I'm gonna ask the obvious question? Is this really your life? If so , I am so proud of you. It takes a real man to realize they don't need the alcohol and trouble! As far as the poem itself goes, I think it is pretty good though it lacks a rhyming rhythm. Stay true to yourself and remember that the Lord Jesus Christ loves you very much!

Thats a good and deep poem ii liike iit...so do u have any more poetry bcause ii wriite poetry ii would miind iif u would let me read more from you...also u dont have to be liike them u kno that u can be diifferent u kno...n uniique no matter what problems may come n go...boy so just be yourself and not liike everyone else

Yeh, that is not a poem!

wow thats so deep ... Love it a lot but it dosen't ryhm much though but very nice clap clap clap

thanks for reading my poem btw :)
see ya