I made a babysitting flyer! Tell me what you think. Also what should i add or subtract.?

- My name is Brooke *. I am 14, soon to be 15
- I have 3 years of babysitting experience
- Baby-sit children 10 months-10 years
- Live locally in *
- I am trustworthy, honest, reliable, loyal, responsible, and a great, loving babysitter
- Have general knowledge through a special class in school in first aid, CPR, and babysitting (infants and children) and working towards a certificate.
- Call me to see when I am available.
- Negotiable on the price per hour (depends on how many children)
- Pet friendly
- Will give 100% full attention to your kids.
- Will also bring small, non-messy activities for the children
- Will do small house work (cleaning, dog walking, and cook simple meals)
- I am willing to work anywhere in the * area (local)

Contact me for more information or questions at鈥?br>

Home: *
Cell: *
Email: tbianchetti2000@yahoo.com
References available!

I look forward to hear from you!
Have a great and safe summer

It's awful long..do you think you could just put the most important stuff and then wait until they call you to talk to them about the rest. Just Put reliable Babysitter and give your number..Now a days you don't know who will get ahold of your flyer and they'll have all of your info..and how to get to you..so be careful where you leave them.

I think you are well on your way to a successful summer and to a career in Marketing and Management!

Thats Good if you lived nearby I would hire you

It's good but if i had children i would let you babysit my children, but you are going to change the format like center it, and add color and stuff.

Good job, although you should add and/or snacks too...and if you're willing references. Other than that you covered all your bases!

Well Brooke, it all sounds good to me.......have fun...dont change anything.......

Hooray for you!!! You seem to have covered all the bases, especially 100% attention to children (no boyfriends or talking on the phone to friends - land line or YOUR cell), safety, tasks willing to perform, can't think of anything you left out but, "contact me for more information or questions" should cover it as any responsible parent would want to meet with you first and not just hire you from a blind flyer. Good luck with your responses, hope they are as organized as you are.

Your list is way too long. Alot can be said during the interview. Say your name NOT your age (pedifiles read this) Your experience, the first aid skills are a big plus. Don't mention money till you meet and know what's involved, I do house cleaning for a living you could get ripped off in that department if you don't know how to charge and they will take advantage. Mention pet friendly and references upon request. Give home phone or cell or both and tha's it. People don't like to read. Short to the point and everything else should be discussed in person.