Could you please tell me what the errors are in this?

May 17, 2005




Ms. Anna M. Omura
4320 Loredo Avenue
Bellevue, WA 98001

Dear Ms. Omura:

Re: OMURA v. JOSTEN
Case No. C430-2

The interrogatories for you鈥檙e case have been prepared. The interrogatories are designed to elicit through information from the defendant. The legal aid in our office, Karen Ortega, will be working with you too revise or edit the interrogatories.

The date for the deposition is eminent. Please contact Karen Ortega within the next few days to finalize these interrogatories. Thank you fore attending to this matter.

Sincerely,

SPERRY, BRAND & FULTON



Everett Fulton
Attorney at Law

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Here you go .... interesting ... you might want to consider using the word "questions" instead of "interrogations" :)

May 17, 2005




Ms. Anna M. Omura
4320 Loredo Avenue
Bellevue, WA 98001

Dear Ms. Omura:

Re:OMURA v. JOSTEN
Case No. C430-2

The interrogations for your case have been prepared. The interrogations are designed to elicit thorough information from the defendant. The legal aide in our office, Karen Ortega, will be working with you to revise or edit the interrogations.

The date for the deposition is imminent. Please contact Karen Ortega within the next few days to finalize these interrogations. Thank you for attending to this matter.

Sincerely,

SPERRY, BRAND & FULTON



Everett Fulton
Attorney at Law

XX:Letter03

indent

abbreviate avenue
you're should be your
take through out
aid should be assistant
too should be to
fore should be for

1st line: you're should be your
2nd line: 'through' shouldn't be there, or it should be the word 'thorough', either way.
4th line: too should be to
5th line: eminent should be imminent, eminent means standing out, above others. Imminent means fast approaching, a sure thing.

May 17, 2005




Ms. Anna M. Omura
4320 Loredo Avenue
Bellevue, WA 98001

Dear Ms. Omura:

Re:OMURA v. JOSTEN
Case No. C430-2

The interrogatories for you鈥檙e (YOUR) case have been prepared. The interrogatories are designed to elicit through (THOROUGH) information from the defendant. The legal aid in our office, Karen Ortega, will be working with you too (TO) revise or edit the interrogatories.

The date for the deposition is eminent. Please contact Karen Ortega within the next few days to finalize these interrogatories. Thank you fore (FOR) attending to this matter.

Sincerely,

SPERRY, BRAND & FULTON



Everett Fulton
Attorney at Law

XX:Letter03

The date should be below Bellevue, WA

Need a space after Re:

"You're" is misspelled. Should be "your"

Designed to elicit "through". "Through" doesn't make sense. Do you mean "thorough"?

The "legal aid" (should be "Legal Aide")

...with you "too" (should be "to")

Thank you "fore" (should be "for")