How to responding e-mail to get babysitter job ?

Hey I need advice.

I sent mail for apply babysitter job 70/day Thursday and Friday for 8 and 2 years old 6am-7:30pm

My mail ;

Dear Mr/Mrs,

My name is Kesyen Kaminski, I saw your add at craiglist and I would like to apply for this Job. Here, information about my self.

I am 25 years old, I am trustworthy, Hard worker, kind and have a lots of experience taking care of children since I was very young my self. I Love children and enjoy being around them. I took care of my adopted brother from the time he is 8 month until 2.5 years old, and I am also a teacher of Sunday school since I am 15 years old.

I come from a very good family that love Lord, My father is an police officer and my mother is a business woman. I enjoy helping other as much as I can. I love God very much and hope that I can be more like him, to children and to all. I have an open heart and mind to people and I always desire to learn more.

The reason I can offer a difference stems from my last role where I was hired to look after 2 children and whilst going about my duties I took it upon myself to finish some ironing and general house keeping duties, once the kids were in bed.

It is my belief that in order to take care of children a sitter should ensure a clean, safe and fun environment. And whilst the service I offer reaches above and beyond the call of duty, responsibility for your kids would not be compromised.

I feel it is important that your children feel completely happy and comfortable with the individual looking after them.

I am first Aid care certified and will bring my F-150, 2008 as transportation. The only problem is I been looking for family that allowing me to bring my 9 month baby girl while I am doing my service. She is a very good baby, I mostly carry her on my back pack and put her on her play pen, I am sure that your 2 years old will be happy have some friend to play with.

I am very responsible with my Job and I guaranty 100% give your money back if I am not doing a good Job !!!

I hope and pray to get this job. Please call me, my phone number is XXX-XXX-XXXX

Thank You very much for you consideration and God Bless



This is her respon ;

Wow - I saw YOUR ad on Craigs list and had your information down to contact you! How neat! Yes, I would love to meet you and see if you would be right for the job! What are you doing Monday next week? I am off that day and would like for you to come by after 4pm so you could meet my oldest also. If this is not a good day for you, we can meet Wednesday. Do you have any references you could send me and I could go ahead and check them out.
By the way, I forgot to mention your daughter is absolutely adorable and you would be most welcome to bring her along when you babysit!!
Thank you for responding,

I really want get this job, I need advice how to responding her mail so I can impress her ???

Thank You very Much. GBU

First, and please don't take offense, use your spell/grammar check, when responding. Keep it simple. Thank her for the opportunity to have an interview. Send her your references. Schedule a time that is convenient for both of you. In my opinion, tell her that you would like to schedule a time when you can meet without your daughter, so that all of your attention would be put toward meeting and bonding with her children. If you both are pleased with this meeting, tell her you would like to schedule a second to introduce your child to the family.