Can someone crtuque my resume summary and give suggestions?

Summary:
Result-oriented production clerk responsible for coordinating and expediting the flow of document duplication services and subpoena requests within or between departments. Reviewed and distributed production, work, and shipment schedules; conferring with department supervisors and adjusters to determine progress of work and completion dates. Examine documents, materials, and products, and monitor work processes, in order to assess completeness, accuracy, and conformance to standards and specifications. Enter, store, and retrieve information on computer-aided equipment. Maintain, adjust, and clean equipment, and perform minor repairs. Requisition and maintain inventories of materials and supplies necessary to meet production demands.

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Limit this to three/four bullet points maximum, use capital letters for your job title: here is my summary of what you are saying, hope its kind of helpful. :)))

* Results-oriented Production Clerk with a proven track record in Document Management services.
* Successfully managed internal relationships ensuring work processes were completed on time, to a high standard and in compliance with strict specifications.
* Maintained, replenished and repaired materials and supplies key to business processes.

it looks good, but might be too wordy.