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Law is something aroused my interest for 1 simple aspect,its eternal optimism best displayed by one of its fundamental aspect "innocent until proven guilty.The sense taht law could give the opportuninty to be an agent of justice to actually know that someone life just got better because of me is the most gratifying thought ever.human beings are weird creatures we are here for freedom and independance and yet we are dependant on law to keep us from going astray.its the one of the reason why i want to be a lawyer.
The power everything controlled by the law.its one field that touches all others n can make areal change other greater good of society.in intermediate we studied about constitutional law n i found the thopic was very interesting n worhty debate n its has served to increase further,my desire to become a lawyer n step into politics.
Now i have the passion not only to become a lawyer but have the strong enthusiasm to become a political analyst.law is one the popular mojor for political advisor.by gettin involved in politics in earlier....volunteer in campaigns and be alert and knowledgeble abt the election n most of all learn how the political process works,do lot of researches,debating and public speaking which i enjoy do all the time are the desirable skills for political analyst.but i believe getting degree from world recognised university would further aid me to be a better person to achive my dreams and to show me a clear way to the door of politics and create higher chances to reach the destination.i want to be ab;e to help people to fullest of my ablity and number of successful politicians began their careers sa prosecutors eg:Rudy giuliani.
no can deny law is the one field that can make real change to a better society ,fight for justice and fairness.the recent malaysia's 12 general election made my desire devloped to desperation where it resulted in multi racial represantation,a real change in parliament and where a number attornies became as politiciansand where it was before a lil corrupted in a system.
and i think as a lawyer i can help people to get out of a sticky situation which could ultimately change the rest of their life..and will be able to open a low costto free law firm in a inner's cities that i enjoy helping people.i want to be a succssful lawyer to protect the society and a politician to serve the society.

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