Writing sample for job. 10 points for the best advice. Thank you?

I applied for a program officer (Women empowerment)position as the Asia Foundation. They asked me to submit a writing sample. I would like to do this. What do you think? Please advice...

This is an attachment of Hope鈥檚 writing sample, Review and Performance Analysis of the HOPWA (Housing Opportunities for Persons with Aids) Program as Administered through HUD (U.S. Department of Housing and Urban Development). The research paper was submitted as a Public Budgeting course semester project to the faculty of Bowie State University in 2007. The research paper was originally 25 pages. For your convenience, I have revised and summarized it into 5 pages.

I also would like to Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to review my application. I am very interested in meeting with you for an interview once the final decisions are made regarding this position. If you have any questions please feel free to contact me by phone or via e-mail...

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Thank you for helping!

Hello, I assume that this is the cover letter for the writing sample? Sounds good, but I've suggested a few edits below.
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Attached is Hope (insert last name)鈥檚 writing sample, "Review and Performance Analysis of the HOPWA (Housing Opportunities for Persons with Aids) Program as Administered through HUD (U.S. Department of Housing and Urban Development)." The research paper was submitted as a Public Budgeting course semester project to the faculty of Bowie State University in 2007. The research paper was originally 25 pages. For your convenience, I have revised and summarized it into 5 pages.

Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to review my application. I hope to better discuss my qualifications and expected contributions to your organization in an interview.

If you have any questions please feel free to contact me by phone or via e-mail (be sure this info is on the cover letter!!!). Looking forward to hearing back from you.
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Good luck!

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