I am writing a research paper on hypospadias! Please read and let me know what you think! Need some advice!?

The abnormal development of the penis that leaves the urethral meatus proximal to its normal glandular position anywhere along the penile shaft, scrotum, or perineum is a condition known as Hypospadias. This condition is a congenital abnormality that occurs during fetal development when the urethra does not grow the entire length of the penis. This is a common disorder occurring in every one out of two-hundred and fifty male births with varying degrees of severity. Hypospadias appears in many forms. The urethral opening can be anywhere from the tip of the penis to the scrotum and sometimes as far back as the anus. However, the majority of the cases occurs near the head of the penis and is often an idiopathic condition. The etiology and enzyme impairment of the males aid in the diagnosis of what exactly goes wrong in the developmental process that causes a result in Hypospadias. There are also environmental and genetic factors that researchers have recently discovered to have an impact

on the developmental outcomes of Hypospadias. There are several risk factors that contribute to this condition that include maternal age and eating habits, paternal abnormalities of the penis, low birth and placental weight, and natural chemicals.

This is my Introduction I need help developing my thesis! If you have any ideas on advice on altering the intro let me know..Thanks

You have no thesis so far. You're just describing the condition. If it's a summary on the condition you could describe more of what you already said.