Baby sitting flyer??

Could i have your opinions on my baby sitting leaftlet please?

http://es.tinypic.com/view.php?pic=1yjr0...
Would you be atrracted to this?
whats good?
whats bad?
Would you consider this ad?

Please help me

I am doing a first aid course and will be police checked before i actually start advertising these details will be added after i have passed both tests.

do you think my prices are good or bad ??

I don't know about the prices in your area but advertisment is very good.

I like the clip art.

I dont like the sentence about references. I think say 'I have x varifiable refernces' sounds better

First you say you can take care of children of all ages, then you give an age bracket on down the page.

In that first sentence, just say '..loves to take care of children aged 6 months-10 years old, then you can cut out the sentence with the age bracket at the bottom

You would be happy to do an interview? Of course you are going to do an interview. Like I would hire you without actually meeting you. I think 'Please call to schedule an interview, I would like to make sure we are all a good fit before committing.' That means you arent just willing if they want to, you expect an interview, and you dont want to jump into something that wont work out.

I dont know about where you are, but in the US, most parents will want to verify the background check on your own. And I encourage parents to do a drug screen as urine drug screens are available here over the counter with completly at home kits. I would say, 'You are welcome to verify my criminal background, and drug screen.'

It's good, but dont leave it black and white. Add some color to really attract people's attention to it. It has everything that I would suggest being on it with the exception of your experience. Put that on there, it may help you get more business.

yea but it says call form 16:30 to 19:30 my clocks only go to 12 but other wise it fine add lots of colors make it a little on the childish side to attract not only adults but kids they like colorful happy things so do parents

yes i would be attracted to this its very good! i would put a little more color to it and your prices are good very good! and i would most defintly consider this ad