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HELP with incomplete INTRO???


I have to present a health topic in school.

So, far this is all i got

Intro:
My presentation is on, broadly speaking, viruses. Viruses are what make up diseases, from the common cold to AIDS鈥︹€?br>

my Project is on Viruses their anotomy and composition.

need an intro to catch attention. IS mine good?? I Prefer a one pAragraph intro.
Help a guy out

TEN POINTS EASY

Ever wonder about what we share when we shake hands, touch a doorknob or kiss? Sometimes we share nasty invisible viruses. Viruses make up diseases, from the common cold to AIDS. Different viruses are spead in different ways, some from casual contact, like catching a cold from touching a doorknob that was just touched by a guy who rubbed his nose, while some require blood, semen or breast milk to be transmitted, like AIDS.

Definitely do NOT start with "my presentation is on" or "today I'm going to tell you about."

You need a catchy intro. Angela who answered your question is on the right track.

http://matcmadison.edu/is/writingcenter/...

Read this to get some strategies for writing out your intro. The six bulleted techniques are great suggestions!

try giving some statistics...how many types of viruses are there? mention something that you think not everyone knows, something that will impress people. your intro is good so far, but...it's not catching too much attention yet.

I THINK IT IS GOOD SO FAR MAY MAYBE A CLOSING FOR THE INTRO LIKE THAT IS WHAT YOU WILL LEARN ABOUT OR SOMETHING

They are often caught

Something something idk what to write lol


SOrry..>.<

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