Dear,
Hello! Our names are Jaritza , Elizuleyma , Sarahi, and Stephanny we are currently attending the eighth grade in the William C. McGinnis School. We understand that this is our last year in the William C. McGinnis, but if you approve this we would love that you continue it.We are writing to you to ask you if we could start an organization of helping those children in need. The money we raise would be donated to UNICEF. We would love to involve our school and out community to help.We speaked to our principal Mrs. Ana Maria Mascenik and she told us that she believes is a great idea, but we need your approval. Our main reasons why we would love to do this is because there are many children that don't have any education, many children are starving, and many children don't have any medical attention.
To begin with there are many children with no education in this world. More than forty-three million kids don't have a school to go to just because of the wars. Their school has been destroyed. Other kids are not able to attend school because of their country's poverty. Although we get an education, there are many kids out there that don't get education. Studies show that more than twenty percent of the kids in country's under poverty can't even get to primary school. Why don't we join together as a school and help change that.
Second, many children are starving. Nine hundred twenty three million people across the world are hungry. About sixteen million kids die each day, because of hunger related problems.That is about one child each five seconds. We would like to help those children that have pass through Natural Disaster, such as hurricane, tsunami, tornadoes, droughts, including others. Those children don't have anything to eat because everything is gone. A good example of this is Hurricane Katrina. Hurricane Katrina was a big hurricane that pass through New Orleans, all those families didn't have anything to eat. This shows you that not only do we need to help the world but also our country. Our country one of the richest country in the world, it needs help. Imagine the others.
Another reason is many children don't have medical attention. Many children get sick in countries under poverty and don't have the help needed to survive. Poverty creates ill-health because it forces people to live in environments that make them sick, without decent shelter, clean water or adequate sanitation. The environment the most people that are under poverty live is contaminated, their nutrient isn't the best causing many diseases.The most common diseases are Cholera, Hepatitis A, AIDS, Malaria, polio, and the West Nile virus. These children need vaccines, and a lot of medical attention. They don't have the money needed to care for their disease, they get really sick and die. We could help by donating money to get those vaccines to does children.
We have many ways how we could earn money, if you approve our idea. One of our ideas is having a bake sale. Another idea is having a candy gram sale. Besides that we could have a tug-o-war, were students of our school could pay to play. As it is getting warmer we could have a car wash where not only teacher and parents come but also other town residents.You are probably asking yourself if we have a name for our organization, but we don't because we are waiting for your approval before we take any further directions.
In conclusion, lets help donate money to UNICEF, there are many kids that don't have anything to eat. Even though we have an education, there are kids around the world that don't. Instead of sitting here assuming other people would help them lets join and help them too. Do you think that we could make a change? We do! Please approve our idea. Thank You in advance.
Sincerely,
P.S. The next page includes the students at our school that would also like this to happen. Dear,
Hello! Our names are Jaritza , Elizuleyma , Sarahi, and Stephanny we are currently attending the eighth grade in the William C. McGinnis School. We understand that this is our last year in the William C. McGinnis, but if you approve this we would love that you continue it. We are writing to you to ask you if we could start an organization of helping those children in need. The money we raise would be donated to UNICEF. We would love to involve our school and out community to help. We spoke to our principal Mrs. Ana Maria Mascenik and she told us that she believes is a great idea, but we need your approval. Our main reasons why we would love to do this are because there are many children that don't have any education, many children are starving, and many children don't have any medical attention.
To begin with there are many children with no education in this world. More than forty-three million kids don't have a school to go to just because of the wars. Their school has been destroyed. Other kids are not able to attend school because of their country's poverty. Although we get an education, there are many kids out there that don't get education. Studies show that more than twenty percent of the kids in this country are under poverty can't even get to primary school. Why don't we join together as a school and help change that.
Second, many children are starving. Nine hundred twenty three million people across the world are hungry. About sixteen million kids die each day, because of hunger related problems. That is about one child each five seconds. We would like to help those children that have pass through Natural Disaster, such as hurricane, tsunami, tornadoes, droughts, including others. Those children don't have anything to eat because everything is gone. A good example of this is Hurricane Katrina. Hurricane Katrina was a big hurricane that passes through New Orleans, all those families didn't have anything to eat. This shows you that not only do we need to help the world but also our country. Our country one of the richest country in the world, it needs help. Imagine the others.
Another reason is many children don't have medical attention. Many children get sick in countries under poverty and don't have the help needed to survive. Poverty creates ill-health because it forces people to live in environments that make them sick, without decent shelter, clean water or adequate sanitation. The environment the most people that are under poverty live is contaminated; their nutrient isn't the best causing many diseases. The most common diseases are Cholera, Hepatitis A, AIDS, Malaria, polio, and the West Nile virus. These children need vaccines, and a lot of medical attention. They don't have the money needed to care for their disease; they get really sick and die. We could help by donating money to get those vaccines to does children.
We have many ways how we could earn money, if you approve our idea. One of our ideas is having a bake sale. Another idea is having a candy gram sale. Besides that we could have a tug-o-war, were students of our school could pay to play. As it is getting warmer we could have a car wash where not only teacher and parents come but also other town residents. You are probably asking yourself if we have a name for our organization, but we don't because we are waiting for your approval before we take any further directions.
In conclusion, let鈥檚 help donate money to UNICEF; there are many kids that don't have anything to eat. Even though we have an education, there are kids around the world that don't. Instead of sitting here assuming other people would help them let鈥檚 join and help them too. Do you think that we could make a change? We do! Please approve our idea. Thank You in advance.
Sincerely,
P.S. There was a few errors and if the names are correct there ya go :) great answer..nd it was hard cause i wished i could of chose both Report Abuse
Ha you have me convinced! LOL! One other website that could really help is water.org. It has everything that you need to know about the water crisis (we're studying that in school) but you have a very convincing argument. If you would mention something about the connection to our life it could really impact people. On one of the worksheets that we did we found out that an average american person uses about 100+ gallons of water per day while an african family uses around 5 gallons of water per day. A single person uses the water in one day that an entire family uses in 20 days! Anyhow just making that connection would really make the people feel guilty (I did so I started a website to raise awareness www.allthewater.wordpress.com) so just MAKE THOSE CONNECTIONS! |
