What do yall think of my song?

I recorded this a while ago as a rap. I just wanted opinions and advvice really
I am the bullet to the head
Iam the young man laying in that casket
I am the blood i am that crip
the girl who was pregnant dont know what to do wit it
I am the daughter o so young who was raped by her father in the presence of her mom
I am the single mother trying to get by I am her son that was killed by that driveby
I am the father who aint even see his kids locked up for 10 years for something he didnt did
I am the little boy who commited suicide just because he is gay cant belive my eyes
rather a suicide its still meant to b a homocide this genocide that plagues the world which i reside in
I am the couple struggling to get by
I am the dawsoon fam' who was killed in that fire
The devil is a lier
But me imma keep pushing it higher
imma touch the sky when I want to but untill the imma stay grinding
I am the unborn baby that was aborted
I am the single mmother who son was deported
I am the abuse I am the abuser I am the one who use and the one who want to be use by you
I am the homeless man living on the streets Iam my brother r.i.p. i keep thinking thebullet for you shoulda been 4 me
I am the daughter of a struggling mother
I am the cancer stricken family
I am the young girl who have hiv
I am the blood i am the sweat i am the tears i am that meth
I am the trials & the tribulations
I am ya heart beat and the breathe that your takin

Your opinions and adice please I know its kinda long :)

Wow cool I like I like.

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